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Glancing at the clock, she shut off her computer, grabbed her leather purse out of the bottom drawer of her desk, and closed her office door. She smiled politely at her employees on the way to the elevator, her panties already damp from the telephone call with Darren. He’d explained what he wanted, and she’d made a mental note of his demands. Whatever he requested in their relationship, she intended to follow through one hundred percent.
The elevator doors swooshed closed. Alone on the ride down, she ran her hand across her breasts to try to relieve the wave of intoxicated yearnings for what Darren planned. The motion heightened her desire and her skin burned. Even separated with distance, Darren seemed to control the way her body reacted to his orders.
With five more floors to go down to the lobby, she didn't have much time. She slipped her hand in the waistband of her pleated navy blue slacks, and her middle finger slid down and homed in on her clit. Her shoulders dropped, her head fell back, and a tiny purr came from deep inside.
The thought of Darren always created a spark in her body that ached to ignite into a roaring fire. Seldom did she achieve satisfaction from her own fingers, but required the master skills of someone more powerful, more controlling, less self conscious. He’d spoiled her for anyone besides him.
The way he ordered her about, pushed her past her boundaries, and showed her what her body was capable of doing became habit forming. She wanted more. More orgasms, more conquests, more daring behavior to feed the hunger for the extreme.
Unable to satisfy her body’s desire and not allowed to disobey Darren’s orders, she waited for the ding to signal the doors to open. She removed her hand in time to not be caught diddling her clit by the incoming crowd. Several men in business suits stepped into the elevator box and gave her a knowing smile. She lifted her chin and exited without a backward glance. Her musty, aroused state must have given away her secret.
That’s how Darren found her those many months ago. He sniffed her out of a crowd one night at a local hot spot where women prowled for one-night stand. Unable to participate, because of the chance at rumors getting back to the office, she held back. It wouldn’t do for her employees to know that the boss lady let her emotions control her sex drive. Aloof and above the others, she couldn’t help the way she’d stared at the man at the bar. Instantly, she’d known he was a man who’d dominate her.
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Bella of Fallen Angel Reviews "Going Down at the Dock" a Very Spicy Short Story! Review by Bella
Overall Apparently, one of Jasmine's kinks is being loaned out to strangers. Either that or she's so into her own slavery that regardless of her own desires, she'll do as Darren asks simply because he's asking her to do so. I was a little confused by the idea that Darren would order her to do this as a test for cohabitation, and as the story was so short it seemed there would be no expansion on the thought.
This is a very spicy short story for those who are looking for a hot summer read with little time to get into plot and character depth.
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Immediately Hooked Me Review by Jacqueline of Night Owl Reviews
Overall I thought the book started out really strong when Jasmine got off the phone and played in the elevator, it immediately hooked me. I couldn't wait to see what was going to happen. After such a strong start I was slightly disappointed in the meat of the story. It just seemed to be missing something, I guess because we barely got to know Darren. He was always there, but we didn't actually meet him until almost the end of the book. However, the sex scenes with the various men on the dock were very steamy. She started off pretty mild and then she just took you on a ride, so to speak. Each scene became more and more risqué' and the written word became pictures in my mind. Jasmine knew what she was doing and the reader can just imagine how the men reacted when they saw the scenes unfold before their eyes. Even the 'pirate' added a cute element to the story, because who doesn't like a good pirate?
I hope that we see more to the relationship between Jasmine and Darren. There's a lot we don't know about the two of them and I'd love to find out more. However, I did enjoy the character driven story and will look for more of Ms. Wood's books to see what else she has in store for her readers.
(Posted on 2/2/10)
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